part 1: http://exomeme.dreamwidth.org/22515.html?thread=94563059#cmt94563059 part 2: http://exomeme.dreamwidth.org/22515.html?thread=94592243#cmt94592243 part 3: http://exomeme.dreamwidth.org/22515.html?thread=94681587#cmt94681587 part 4a: http://exomeme.dreamwidth.org/22956.html?thread=98101932#cmt98101932 part 4b: http://exomeme.dreamwidth.org/23257.html?thread=99186905#cmt99186905 part 4c: http://exomeme.dreamwidth.org/23257.html?thread=99187929#cmt99187929 part 4d: http://exomeme.dreamwidth.org/23332.html?thread=100375076#cmt100375076 part 4e: http://exomeme.dreamwidth.org/23332.html?thread=100375588#cmt100375588 part 4f: http://exomeme.dreamwidth.org/23332.html?thread=100376612#cmt100376612
crit/comments would be lovely but can i please just get some affirmation here that it made sense in the end lol?? i started writing the "part 4"s after sutao got eliminated so i had to fit them into the direction the first three parts were already going (and that i hadn't planned on continuing). i was just very nervous about everything being too messy to understand
sorry to all anons who were hoping for a full-on time travel fic ;;
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part 1: http://exomeme.dreamwidth.org/22515.html?thread=94563059#cmt94563059
part 2: http://exomeme.dreamwidth.org/22515.html?thread=94592243#cmt94592243
part 3: http://exomeme.dreamwidth.org/22515.html?thread=94681587#cmt94681587
part 4a: http://exomeme.dreamwidth.org/22956.html?thread=98101932#cmt98101932
part 4b: http://exomeme.dreamwidth.org/23257.html?thread=99186905#cmt99186905
part 4c: http://exomeme.dreamwidth.org/23257.html?thread=99187929#cmt99187929
part 4d: http://exomeme.dreamwidth.org/23332.html?thread=100375076#cmt100375076
part 4e: http://exomeme.dreamwidth.org/23332.html?thread=100375588#cmt100375588
part 4f: http://exomeme.dreamwidth.org/23332.html?thread=100376612#cmt100376612
crit/comments would be lovely but can i please just get some affirmation here that it made sense in the end lol?? i started writing the "part 4"s after sutao got eliminated so i had to fit them into the direction the first three parts were already going (and that i hadn't planned on continuing). i was just very nervous about everything being too messy to understand
sorry to all anons who were hoping for a full-on time travel fic ;;